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Forever Friends by ~krijt:iconkrijt:



I see you standing there,
I don't think you know how much I care.
No matter how much they say,
by your side I will always stay.

Let me ease some of the pain,
come here step out of the rain.
Here take my hand,
I promise I will help you stand.

Trust me and tell me,
open up, let me see,
what's hurting you,
what is it that I can do?

I want to see inside your brain,
guard the hope, share the pain,
all I see is crying eyes,
but deep inside the secret lies.

What is it that you hide?
No matter what, I am always by your side.

Through thick and through thin,
no matter the trouble you're in,
I will always be your friend,
right up to the very end.
©2006-2009 ~krijt
:iconkrijt:

Author's Comments

Well, this poem I didn't do alone. I present to you..

Forever Friends, by..
Me =P and ~purple-passionus we worked together on this one :)

Enjoy

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:iconpurple-passionus:
.......... I think this is one of my best :)

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I also post alot of my work here
[link]

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent

Life is nothing but a mind fuck .... and a whole bunch of bad days

Approximately 61% of all dogs entering shelters are kil
:iconpurple-passionus:
well you already know how I feel about this ... and I think it is one of my best yet

--
I also post alot of my work here
[link]

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent

Life is nothing but a mind fuck .... and a whole bunch of bad days

Approximately 61% of all dogs entering shelters are kil
:iconkrijt:
One of our best ;)

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"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
:iconaislin-sedai:
Well it took some time before I noticed it was AABB rhyme.. and that's very good, 'cause I don't like that most of the time and now I didn't even notice ^^

Anyway I think it's very good :) :+favlove:

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Caught between what happened and what could never be
:iconkrijt:
Hehe I'll tell her you liked it :) After all, we wrote it together ( and she did most of the work ;) )

--
"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
:iconaislin-sedai:
ok ^_^

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Caught between what happened and what could never be
:iconisika:
Great Poem!

--
"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
:iconkrijt:
We're pretty proud of it =D

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"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
:iconpepineros:
I mussay I don't really like the rythm, but the rhyme is very nice indeed :) and the subject is, of course xD but still, rythm-fetisjt die ik ben, the lack of steady rythm kinda ruins it for me. so, almost made it a fav ^^; but, alas.

--
Music is an art form whose medium is sound organized in time. The word derives from the Greek μουσική (mousike), '(art) of the Muses'. - Wikipedia

> "Halt, evildoers!"
< "Oh, this ought to be good."
> "...pun intended?"

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