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The biggest loss by ~krijt:iconkrijt:



You, gripped tightly in the embrace
of my arms, a soft, fleshy cage.
You, with eyes of clouds and rain,
tears of raindrops and storms.

Like the branches of a tree, you reach
up to your destination point.
And my arms, your fleshy cage, slowly
part, and release you from your body.

A wolf's howl escapes my human lips,
my love, my life, it all left my body
in that single moment of pain as my
clothes turn red with your blood.

A rainbow, a glistening in the sky of
the charcoal black night.
In that fleshy cage life's left you,
And now you rise.

As your soul's glisten fades, like
the stars and the moon do now,
the world turns white with the glow
of the suprime, ultimate light.
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Just a poem.

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:iconireth91:
Oe, I'm the first^^As I said before: I love it. I especially like these lines:
"A rainbow, a glistening in the sky of
the charcoal black night."
Don't know why though, but I think those are the best lines in the entire poem. Don't get me wrong, the rest of the poem is great too, I just really like thoese lines^^

:hug:

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~A Poet can survive anything...but a misprint...~
:iconkrijt:
Hehehe, thanks a lot :hug: :)

--
"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
:iconzoetdropje:
like it:)

--
If you fall, i'll catch.
If you love i'll love.
And so it goed my dear.
Don't be scared.
You'll be safe.
This I swear,
If you only loved me back.
~the Misery- Sonata Arctica
:iconisika:
wow, that was so cool!! I loved it, it's really really really good! *bows down to your greatness*

--
"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
:iconkrijt:
Me too. :)

--
"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
:iconkrijt:
*kicks your butt to make you stand up straight*

No bowing allowed to tiny little me! =P

No really, thanks a lot ^^ :hug: Really appreciate you actually read through my junk =P

--
"Yay for tree-hugging, guitar-playing-and-singing-along, tye-dye-shirt-wearing, pacifistic, long-haired, bisexual hippies!" --Me
Spread the hugs! [link] :hug:
:iconisika:
Owwww, ok fine. ‘mental note to self, never bow to krijt’ you are a great poet and I read all your works, when they are in english. THEY ARE NOT JUNK!!!! :hug:

--
"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
:iconaislin-sedai:
beautiful :)

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Caught between what happened and what could never be
:iconpoetmorte:
Very nice writing.

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